CrystalPool's Dream

O.o we have a name change?

Im on my nook so typos are bad, i fixed it though, lol x3
anyway, continue on with ur.

-Silvereye-

I blinked as Dragonstar lifted Smokeypelt off the ground, "wait, what did she do?" I was confused, so far the rogue had only acted confused and in pain, I hadn't seen her being aggressive other than when I'd gotten her angry earlier, "she hasn't been aggressive at all around me" I said, thinking, maybe she'd been aggressive to them before I'd got there

(Sorry, I'm not going to be on after Wednesday, we get our IPads taken off of us then, and I don't really have a way of getting on here without me IPad)(I might be on throughout the holidays though, I'm going to my mums house, and I'm sure she'll let me on)

Dragonstar turned to Silvereye with a "don't question me. ever." kind of look that usually meant he didn't want to hear the others complaining about what he did. He was the leader and as long as he lived, they would follow his orders and not question him. After turning away and bounding off into the forest while still holding the rogue in his jaws, he made his was weaving through the trees and leaping oer brambles with ease as he headed back to camp.

@Doggo : don't worry. Ill be sure to keep an update on what's been going on while you're gone.

(Thankyou)

-Silvereye-

I shrunk away from Dragonstars gaze, before looking after him when he bounded away with Smokeypelt, "sorry" I said in a small voice, knowing he wouldn't hear me, I thought for a moment before quickly following him

As Driftstorm sprang up from the ground, he started sprinting after Dragonstar, panting hard. He really had to work on his stamina. He stopped for a second near Silvereye, and muttered,
"She was trespassing. That's enough for Dragonstar to treat her like this". He continued to run after Dragonstar and the rogue.

-Silvereye-

I listened as Driftstorm explained to me why Smokeypelt was being treated the way she was, and I could understand it, but what I didn't understand was that I had never been treated like this when I'd first come here. I continued to race after Dragonstar, I knew I was lagging, I had always been an exetremely fast runner, but my thoughts were holding me back, I shook them away and focused on drumming one paw after the other into the earth, and feeling the thrill of the run course through my muscles, I easily caught up to Driftstorm, and ran past him, before coming up to Dragonstar, "wait" I said breathlessly, "I mean no *puff* disrespect but *puff* why was I not treated like this when I first *puff* arrived?" I asked, knowing that, after he'd ordered me not to doubt his actions, that even saying no disrespect, the question was still going to come of disrespectful

"Ow.." smokeypelt mewed, trying to avoid silvereyes qestion of being answered. Smokeypelt awkwardly twitched her fluffy tail in anoyance.

-Silvereye-

I nodded with understanding, "okay" I said, not wishing to go on with any more questions, even though I had a number of them rattling around in my head. I walked over to where Dragonstar had dropped Driftstorm and lay in front of her, "I have to guard you" I said apologetically, before mumbling, "I hate guarding duty"

(( where can I jump in lol :3 ))

(Well, you're the medicine cat right? Drftstorm injured her paw, maybe you could help make it better?)

CrystalPool padded over to DroftStorm. "Would you like me to look at your paw?" she asked.

"my paw, thank you very much," smokeypelt muttered to herself in a selfesh tone.


((Heh, my pawzie, remember?... i think its mine, anyway o3o))

(Smokeypelt my bad)(lol)

*sigh* I can't jump in anywhere yet. Lol so far, graypaw is sleeping, and Dragonstar is once again moarning over the loss of his sister Ravenheart. -.-

Smokeypelt got up and wandered around the camp, not much... itll do for now i guess. she stayed clear of dragonstar.

Driftstorm padded over to the fresh kill pile, taking a large vole to Crystalpool and dropping it in front of her. "You must be tired. Here, do you want to share it with me?"

"Sure." CrystalPool said and she bent down and started eating.

-Silvereye-

I padded over to a soft patch of grass and lay down on it, half closing my eyes, was ready for just a little nap, only a small one, just a..... *snore*

(Lol)

(Last day!!!!)

-Nightfur-

I crept slowly and silently, watching my prey. I watched each twitch of its whiskers and every flick of its long ears. The rabbit was clueless as I stalked it, to busy eating, and only occasionally would it look about, as if sensing that I was there. I licked my lips, and thanked starclan that my stomach had not yet rumbled loud enough to scare away my prey. Unsheathing my claws and settling back readying myself to pounce, I sprang forward flying through the air before landing on the juicey rabbit. I killed it instantly with a hard snap of my jaws while the only sound it was able to emit was a tiny squeak, before the life trickled out of its body. I ate quickly, before burying the bones, and climbing up a nearby tree. Reaching the top, I scouted the area around me that I had scented earlier when I had crossed into a clans territory. I was glad I did so due to the many new cats to fight, new prey to hunt, and a new area to rule.

edited by Abigale Wolf

dont use so many commas. it makes your paragraph a run on sentence. and ill have Ravenheart and the kitty-pet be close to Nightfur since the clan's territory is quite large. Hardly any cats go near the outter boarder where the two-leg nests seem to stalk the tree-line. that is why no one has found the beloved sister of Dragonstar.

The day seemed to drag on as the two sat talking to each other until sudenly, a glimps of a dark figure caught Ravenheart's eye. Snowbell, one who would later on be named Cloudpaw, followed the older cat's gaze but couldn't see past the trees and brambles like the black cat since she was not a warrior. Nor was she ever trained in the ways of the wild clan cats.

Jumping down from her purch, and into the grass bellow that ran between the trees and the two-leg fence, she quickly crouched down and began to prawl. Snowbell followed but was told to stay back while the black cat investigated the area. The older she-cat wanted to see who dared cross into a forebidden part of the forest. It was forebidden due to the two-leg activity and them crawling about with their machines and brutal dogs.

(Sorry, I have a habit of that, I seem to dislike full-stops! Lol)

-Nightfur-

I heard the sound of something moving below me, and I shifted my weight on the branch that I sat on, so I could look down to see what it was. Expecting a two-leg or one of theirdogs, I was surprised to see a cat, looking around as if expecting to see something.

(I only have another hour then I'm gone, until I can get back on sometime, hopefully)